Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

Thank you for sharing these two poems with me. They are well written and well thought out. The feelings you express in both are raw and emotional. You wrote the free verse very well. The only thing I would improve upon would be using more figurative language and showing your reader the emotion instead of just telling about it.

Keep up the excellent writing!

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