Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group! I apologize for reviewing this so late compared to when you sent the request. My offline life was a bit out of control in June! Your poem is well written and thought out. Your descriptive words leave the reader with great images of the woman and her art. I love the use of the refrain throughout the piece. You have a well crafted piece, the only suggestion I would have is to "clean" it up a bit and make the non-refrain lines a more consistent meter. Keep up the great writing! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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