Review number # 1 of week June 25h- July 1st

Hi Panda,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive and "Game of Thrones"  .





Title: Changing of the Seasons

First Impression: Impressive visually and technically, you have rocked the etheree not once but four times. I've done a double myself, but haven't tried to do four double etheree's yet, that is wicked cool.

What I liked: I felt like I was watching the seasons unfold between the fairies and the dragons. Spring and Autumn fairies opposing the summer and winter dragons, perfect balance between the two make believe worlds. I thought the images created in each double etheree were engaging and invited the reader to linger to see what meteorological occurrence would happen. It doesn't look like the Summer Dragon has been very successful thus far in this year but I will remain hopeful. The trees look luscious so hopefully we will have a vibrant fall.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the form is correct in each double etheree, the punctuation and grammar is correct. The poem flows smoothly when read out loud.

Favorite Parts: The Summer Dragon because I love the longer days and all vegetation that began in the spring. Though I am happy to see the golden amber hues too. I know I am fickle but I do love all the seasons.

Overall Impression: The poem rocks! The style was verbally and visually appealing, this reader enjoyed it a lot.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn

What does the Fox say. This is the last day of the games!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .