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Hi Night Owl,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for "Simply Positive Review Forum "  and for the "Game of Thrones" 





Title: Poetry by Night Owl

First Impression: Interesting selection of poetry you have begun in your book, hope to see more over time.

What I liked: Sorrow Day I felt sad that the voice of the poem only found joy when toying with the thoughts of death. Definitely dark images came to mind, then I saw the genre and noted it was dark and death. Today is the day, made me feel better that possibilities existed and life was not so dark.

What needs your attention: This is a collection of nine poems, primarily free style with some rhyming but not in all. I believe punctuation would improve the pace your poem is read because the reader would know when you want them to linger or speed on through.

Favorite Parts: This is old romantic like Love is the way, the best because living life without delay in love and not to have any emotions cast aside in the wind. That is great imagery there for the reader,

Overall Impression: The book is organized and easy to read, each poem reflects different moods of the author. They all flow smoothly when read out loud, some are dark and some are more up lifting. I do recommend the author try adding punctuation but that is only my opinion.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn

What does the fox say??? Today is the final day of the Games, we made it!




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .