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 Torchwood  [13+]
A criminal who writes a book.
by Johnny cue
Review of Torchwood  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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What kind of fiction is this? needs editing with punctuation marks , to make it more readable. The plot is not existing, so the fiction is hanging around the written words which are confusing without the grammar correction. It might have some story, if it's edited a little.
Needs editing,
Jaya H.


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