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 Ribbons  [13+]
Pretty ribbons make little girls happy, don't they?
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Review of Ribbons  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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This fiction is telling some dark story, but it's not very clear. It 's not specified in any plot or the character is not well defined , it's hard to achieve all that in so few words, is it supposed to be short, some word limitations? It could be sent to some contest, with given prompt or word limit.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.


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