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Review of Dark Devotion  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

I am a huge fan of dark items and I couldn't resist taking a look at this poem after I saw that it was in the dark genres. I loved the title of your poem which gives the reader the idea about what this poem is about, a love or affection that's bad but then you are drawn to every bad thing especially love, like an addiction, and that is presented in your poem.

The flow of your poem is good, there was no interruption and I enjoyed it. The beginning lines of your poem were strong, especially the first line which was very dark but beautiful at the same time. The conventions and poetic devices you used in your poem were very strong, and added a good impact on the poem and the reader. Your reference to the snake was powerful as you went on and described how it attacked it's prey. My favourite lines were

Tattered, my dreams of a sweet remedy–
invaded–my will to survive–
our love is battered with bloody regret;
no distance will keep me alive.

I loved the theme presented in these lines. They really touched me and the choice of words could not have been more perfect! *Heart*

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK!

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