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Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

It's been a long time since I read a psychology work and I was intrigued to read what the poem was about when I noticed the genre. The title of your poem is very interesting because it gives away a hint of horror, scary and emptiness, even loneliness, to the reader. After reading the poem, the title is perfect for your poem!

The first line of your poem is very deep and touching. All of us have a lot of masks, many different masks, our different personalities, some of them are even those we do not know of. You capture the type of personalities we have in a perfect way. I read a picture on facebook a while ago which was that every person has three faces, one that he shows to family, one that he shows to everyone else and one that no one sees but himself and that was a very dark but true fact because sometimes, people pretend to be someone else, adopt a different personality because they are ashamed, embarrassed of themselves.

You have portrayed how guilt can eat away a person, his soul perfectly in your poem. Loved the imagery used! The flow of your poem was particularly good and there was not even a single interruption. The poetic devices which you used in your poem were very influencing and added a good impact on the poem. My favourite line was the like ghosts-ships of guilt lost in a fog at sea. because it just touched me. when blinding yourself from sights you shouldn’t see. - this phrase for some reason, brought the image of a child in my mind, because I felt innocence portrayed here and I felt sympathy for the narrator to have seen things that no one should have. Beautiful and very powerful!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK!
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