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Hi ENB ,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "Invalid Item"  today in affiliation with "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Title: It's a unique title, that doesn't immediately reveal what is going on with this activity, but makes it very clear what the core idea of this activity is. Finally build that evil little world you've got orbiting your brain!

First Impression: I'm so glad you offer this class. It's not a popular opinion, but there's something about New Horizons I'm not a huge fan of. Maybe it's the whole formal thing behind it. This appears to be a little more laid back, but still expects its particpants to get the work done, learn a lot and have fun!

Appearance: Online, appearance is everything. This forum looks well presented to me! You've decorated it with the odd *Earth* and you've used green as a part of your colour scheme. There's definitely a good theme building here.

Lessons: I've taken a really quick peak at the lessons. (Don't worry, I only read the first one! I daren't read ahead after your warnings. Although those warnings do make me curious. *Laugh* They're helpful and the homework seems fair and useful for me.

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here!

Closing Thoughts: Thanks for offering this wonderful class for the community. I look forward to participating. I don't have any suggestions to offer, as this appears to be a well-thought out, good class. See you in August, teacher! *Salute*

Lorraine

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