im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review.

Format:
Your format seemed to me strange for this length of poem.

Favorite part
His song of alarm
starts the day for the farmer
who rises along with the sun.

You did a good job wording everything and grabbing random words and throwing it together, You may not see it that way but thats how i rhymn so i see it that way.
You did a god job on this peom keep up the good work.

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