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 A lovely spot.  [GC]
Anglers get possessive about their secret fishing pools.
by Weefatfella
Review of A lovely spot.  
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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Suitclub*
This is a Simply positive Review.

*Lock* Wow, this story grabbed me by arm and pulled me right into the scene. There is a reason for that. The descriptions highlighted the natural backdrop and architectural picture of a bridge over the water, the calmness of the moment and stillness of the night, moon light and fly fishing. What else could a reader ask for in this compact, yet bursting at the seams story? You've got it all covered.

*Key* It is a dark story, of course and all is not what it appears to be at first. I like the meshing-in of the conflict and the peaceful respite following a not so peaceful struggle.

Observation:

"He examined the fish, it was eight inches long and looked and felt around eight pounds in weight."

*Faucet* I do love to fish, mostly salt water. However, I have a difficult time wrapping my mind around and eight-inch long trout, weighing eight pounds? It seems like a lot of weight within a small frame. Just my humble opinion, of course.

*Dropr* I had to change the rating of this item, due to the violence and graphic material.

*Fisho* Otherwise, this was a very entertaining story.

Well done! *Tophat*

Until next time--write on!

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WebWitch




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