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Review of Holiday Confusion  
Review by ~ IVELTAC ~
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review.

You did a great job throwing this poem together. You created this poem out of scratch and i think you put alot of thought into it before you finilished it.

favorite part:
Soon the Easter Bunny
will be driving Santa's sleigh,
and breaking people's hearts
ev'ry Valentine's Day.

I love it. you mixed all the people up and made the whole thing funny to read. And just thinking about it made me laugh.


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