Moonlight and magic mix and make a marvelous cameo-like verse. The ambience is right and the setting as well. The valley, the hill and the figure of a lovely woman on the top are great images, visual as well as appealing to mind.
Love works the magic- No physical effort to reach the lady on the mountain top succeeded. It is only when he fails with love still overflowing in his heart, did he find himself in her proximity. Love makes the impossible, possible and melts a stony heart and make it come alive with warmth.
"...I shout that I love you.
In a blink, I stand but a few feet away."
What is special about this poem is that it tells the story of how sincere love can transform impediments into easy steps to cross under the shining moon.

It flows well.

Write on!