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*Tulipp* Greetings, Jacky ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Prompt: Some folks like to Hi-Light their favorite lines in a book. Others are enraged by such a desecration. Write a story or poem about finding a used book full of yellow markings.

*Reading* You did a nice job following the prompt. *Smile* A library book with highlighted words! *Shock* Oh, my. *Facepalm* I worked in a library for about 20 years, so I cringe to think someone would do that. *Laugh* At first, when you wrote the word "the" had been highlighted, all I could think of was when I was little and learning to read. I went through a book and circled all the "the" words. *Laugh* Anyway, nice work. But what a spoiler that highlighter was!!!

*Thumbsupr* I loved your second stanza:

I settle in with lots of time
This afternoon will all be mine,
To finally read the latest book
All snuggled in my reading nook.


*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*


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