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Glow-Worm  [E]
Free verse entry for Stormy's Poetry Contest
by Happy May 2024!
Review of Glow-Worm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You gave good imagery and drew me in. It brought to min d the days of my youth an glow worms.

When you mentioned the handkerchief I grew sad. I kept wanting you to tell me you' let it go. So if this was based in fact, tell me you let it go.

I like the line-charmed my imagination. I love fantasy and you brought to mind fairies and all.
Thanks for sharing.

love, LinnAnn

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