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Hello there, kedwards4267
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Beach*

*Suitdiamond* Oh, my, this was a poem to bring tears to the eyes for sure. I love it because I can appreciate the value of something well-made, many years ago, that could still be running to this day, with proper maintenance, and the love of the memories it holds for a family, for many generations.

*Type* It was a beautiful story told in verse. I pictured each generation and the constant within, the Chevy truck, which was a mainstay on that family farm.

*Buttonr* I love how each son forward, enjoyed the truck for its durability when going about the family business. Life on the farm is difficult, but beautiful memories like this are priceless.

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*Fencebr**Chicken**Fencebr* There were a couple blips on my radar. Those are where a word is placed somewhere to fit into a line and push for the inevitable rhyme, yet looks a little out of place. Here is an example of a word use that could use a change.

"Jimmy still loved his faithful old truck" faithful seems more appropriate for a pet. Perhaps, reliable, durable, sturdy, might be better choices.

*Suitspade* I'm not big on rhyming poetry per se, but this heartwarming story, made me smile. It had all the imagery that one could ask for, line after line. It is a poetic history of this family's life, through generations, on the farm.


Well done! *Leafr*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
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