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Hello groovygirl

This is a beautifully evocative little poem about changing seasons with some effective descriptions which help bring the poem to life for the reader.

Your words flow well and you show real skill in your use of rhyme. I particularly like the 'wrath / path' rhyme in your opening lines.

An enjoyable poem that was a real pleasure to read.

Thanks for sharing your work.

Best wishes,
Mark


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