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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello InkSpout

This is a poem that I'm sure many readers on here will relate to. I know I often struggle to find that elusive 'wayward' word.

Overall this flows pretty well but it does feel like a draft of a poem rather than a finished piece. I spotted a few errors:

You have one m too many in 'momments'.
'Oppertunity' should be 'opportunity'.
You don't need the apostrophe in 'journey's'.

I hope this helps. With a bit more editing you could have a very good poem here. As it stands it already has a lot of potential.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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