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Hello rl

This is a very effective little poem with some strong descriptions and great word choice. I particularly like the internal rhyme of 'whirling, twirling'. This poem has a good pace and rhythm and I think it would work well read aloud.

I really like the sentiment about cherishing love as well. The title captures the theme and drew me to the poem.

Nice job :)

Best wishes,
Mark


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