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Hello rl This is a very effective little poem with some strong descriptions and great word choice. I particularly like the internal rhyme of 'whirling, twirling'. This poem has a good pace and rhythm and I think it would work well read aloud. I really like the sentiment about cherishing love as well. The title captures the theme and drew me to the poem. Nice job :) Best wishes, Mark ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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