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 A Dream So Real: the Ultimate  [E]
For sports junkies like myself to unite and celebrate - a rhyming poem.
by Tim Chiu
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Tim Chiu

Although not much of a sports fan, I really enjoyed this poem and would rate it one of the very best I've read of yours. You've got good rhythm and pace here, helped by skilful use of rhyme.

I love the subtle humour as well (especially of 'those clowns' which made me smile).

I think this would be an good poem to read aloud.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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