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 My Series  [E]
a folder for all my series!
by Izzy's Writing
Review of My Series  
Review by Cinn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy WDC B-Day for the... umm... third time? *Smile*

Okay, so I was pretty curious about the "series". My first and only thought really was scripts for some reason. *Laugh* I think that I might have landed on some decent advice for you in these reviews.

Your item descriptions are super vague at times. This is the second one that was unclear to me what would be in there. "A folder for all my [stories told in] series!" would make a big difference. For the song folder, "A folder for all my song [lyrics]" would work just fine. See what I mean?

Anyway, that's not a big deal. I just thought I'd mention it. You might want to make the item titles or descriptions clearer as far as which story belongs to which series too. Some of them are clearer than others. You might get more reviews if the descriptions said "Part 1", "Part 2" or something like you did with the Kronner stories. Some people on here do love to review serials and novels on here.

That's it. A little feedback but mostly just another quickie rating so that your folders wont be bare. 5 more purple stars coming your way, and I might do another... maybe. *Laugh*

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