Review number # 3 of week July 24-30

Hi Jesse,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Fallen Leaves

First Impression: Absolutely lovely imagery from beginning to end in this poem, I could feel the leaves fluttering in my mind.

What I liked: A whispering breeze invited me to watch what happened next, that stanza was perfect following the glimpses of the surroundings.

What needs your attention: Not a thing, each stanza is strong on its own yet contributes so much to the next one making the story flow smoothly.

Favorite Parts: I smiled at the image that came to mine with the words cavorting and flirting before landing on a splintered bough together. The imagery was delightful in more ways than just the leaves. Life is so much like that too, we change over time before we also become dust.

Overall Impression: The poem lived up to its simple description of love story and fulfilled the genres powerfully with the author creativity. A story of leaves, a story of life that reminds this reader to cherish every moment they end too fast.
Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




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