Review number # 5 of week July 24-30

Hi Ken, you were missed in the spam garden party earlier this month.

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Music of the Spheres

First Impression: The poem was so inviting and the imagery was enjoyable to my mind's eye.

What I liked: How smoothly you made the villanelle flow, it did not feel forced at all.

What needs your attention: Not a thing, the imagery is delightful, the word choices by the author enhance the flow of the poem. It could easily be a melody in a song.

Favorite Parts: Each theme unique, yes I do agree. I stand and look at the heavens in awe every time. It is such a powerful masterpiece, we are truly blessed that we can enjoy it.

Overall Impression: I enjoyed this immensely, the melody of the night to me is something I will never tire of enjoying. I frequently get up at night and sit in the darkness enjoying the stars and the silence of the night.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .