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Review of August Skies  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Fi
This is a Simply positive Review! *Apple*

*Glassesy* I found your poem highlighted in this week's Poetry Newsletter, edited by northernwrites.

*Umbrellao* This poem is the type, that a reader wishes to read a few times, before leaving the page. I fell into the midst of mid-winter in New Zealand, and the rainy, stormy weather, which can keep a soul impatiently awaiting spring's arrival.

The lyrical flow enraptured the spirit and painted crisp images in my mind. The lines well-woven together to create a melody to the ears as the words are whispered. I love when that happens. *Mountainsb*

*Beakerg* I enjoyed the emphasis created on the verses, by the use of the refrain line, "August skies collapse into the west."

*Boothb* Yes, winters do seem to be the longest season, whether it brings snow and cold, or torrential rains, and floods, it can wear-down a spirit, that has the need, to run free upon the grassy meadows, sans the puddles and muddy roads.

Beautifully done! *Countrynz*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch






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