This is a beautiful little poem that expresses the difficulty writers have in trying to put into words what nature has perfected. I think many readers here on WDC will be able to relate to this choice of subject matter. I certainly can. I really like the trois-par-huit form you've used here. The poem flows well with great choice of rhyme words. I couldn't find any errors and enjoyed this immensely, thus the full 5 star rating.
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