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The Gentleman's Daughter  [ASR]
A Jane Austen type romance story. What else do I write anymore?
by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Hand1* You mentioned that you wrote a Jane Austen period type story so I came looking to read.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought that it was a great adventure. I was glad that Kendall really loved Ariana and that everything came to fruition because of the dangerous balloon ride. It sounded quite exciting and her father was so upset, but it came out good in the end, thank goodness!

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I thought you did a good job of presenting the family dynamics and the pressure to marry, both on the son and the daughter. Maybe you will write more about Andrew and Ariana and how they get on at a future time.

Wonderful work here, Megan!

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Thumbsupr*DISCLAIMER*Thumbsupl*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the story told based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it.

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