Transition smoother between characters thoughts and feelings so you aren't accused of 'head hopping'. I've been reading up on POV, there is a way to transition from one character to another smoothly. I've been reading Orson Scott Card's 'Characters & Viewpoint'.

Unless the water or coffee is paramount in a scene, just pick one. Having both makes them seem more important than they are.

I like the way you slip in a bit of description with the black hair on the wedding dress.

'old fashioned types'...not sure the store would call them that. Traditional was a good word. You may want MC to call it old fashioned and the store say traditional.

Are you sure you want the word 'bemused' with the MC's character finding the dress?

Marie watched the two enter --I've forgotten which was mother in law or sister in law. You might want to state Marie watched as bride and ... entered. Don't make the reader go back to the beginning to find out who is who.

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

LinnAnn