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Review of Arrows & Ashes  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi Fi ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

The reason I chose to read and review this poem is because of the cover photo of your poem! I am a huge fan of Arrow series and the picture is of Oliver Queen also know as the Arrow from the Arrow series! Other than the cover photo, I loved the title of the poem that gave away an impression of a soldier who is in a battle and when the battle is over, the soldier finds nothing in himself.

The first stanza of the poem was good, it expressed the feelings of hopelessness and desperation perfectly in the poem. The second stanza gives a more vivid and clear idea about the soldier falling, despite the battle that has ended, lost or won, resulting in a life ending as well. You used amazing and very strong vocabulary to express the emotions to the reader, well done! My favourite stanza was the second one because it delivered a lot of dark emotions to the reader, well done! Loved it!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

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