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"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, ~Minja~ This is a Simply positive Review. I am also judging your cNote shop entry in the "The Bard's Hall Contest" . Thank you for entering! My goodness, I really enjoyed looking through your notes. I loved the antiquity of it, the vintage backgrounds and the sepia tint, keeping within the theme. Points of Interest: Eye appeal ... fabulous! Theme ... Friendship, encouragement -- nicely done Originality ... Very unique Message within the note: Beautifully done, with a couple bumps on the road that can be easily edited. See below. Observations: These quotes are from two cNotes' messages, which had a couple grammar errors, where I can see that English is not your first language. "Home is where your heart belong, [belongs] where everything feels right, not wrong, where you have a words to share [word] and where people about your words care. When you decide to stop to roam, WDC will always say: DEAR STRANGER, WELCOME HOME." ~~~ "You've heard it so many times before that life has no purpose, therefore you keep on going no matter what they say 'cause key of happiness in your heart lay. What makes you special is your being something that others may [be]seeing, open your heart, don't let it be blocked, DON'T LEAVE IMPORTANT WORDS LOCKED." Lovely messages, by the way! As I stated above, these couple issues can be edited easily, leaving your shop open for business with no ripples in the smooth texture of these beautiful messages. Well done! Until next time, write on, creat on! Regards, WebWitch
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