"Captivating" is the word that came to my mind when I decided to write a review.

Yup, this is extremely captivating. You've put on quite a performance!

The title does a great job of capturing the essence of the poem. It drew my attention and made me want to read.

While I was reading I could see the beautiful woman swaying around, gyrating without a care in the world; her audience transfixed and completely entranced.

I felt the narrator's intensity and desire; the "want," and the "need" were almost tangible.

I particularly enjoyed the part where: "she slows." That was quite potent.

You did a great job! Your descriptions perfectly portrayed the scene and created a vivid and beautiful image that both captures and engages your reader's imagination.

An incredibly enjoyable read.

Many thanks for sharing this.

You responded to this review 08/23/2015 @ 10:40am EDT

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