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*Tulipp* Greetings, Jacky ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp!

Prompt: Choose something you've never attempted and have your character (or you) sign up and go. Make your poem or story of this adventurous participation a humorous one.

*Reading* *Laugh* I loved this, Jacky! What a great name for the club, too: Roller Skating Disco in-line Skating Club!

*Starfishp* About six or seven years ago, Hubby gave me inline skates for Christmas. I never asked for them... he just thought he'd get them for me along with a helmet and padding. I'd broken my leg five years previous to that, so...What was he thinking? *Laugh* He doesn't even in-line skate! I permanently lent everything to my 35 year-old daughter, who is married with children. She loves them! I am a clutz. *Rolleyes*

*Thumbsupr* I loved this last stanza:

They kindly and politely gave my fee back
(Actually they made it clear that I was gone.)
So the Roller Skating Disco in-line Skating Club
For me, was skate alone, with earphones on.


*Star* Best of luck in the contest! *Smile*

Have a great day and...
*Tulipp*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Tulipp*


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