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by A Guest Visitor
Review of Our World  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I felt myself relaxing as I read this.

You called to mind many beautiful images in succession.

This is my favorite line: "Listen to the melody
and song of the lark" a beautiful metaphor!

This poem flows with ease which makes it an even more relaxing and inspiring read.

And I particularly enjoyed the ending. If only we'd really slow down and admire "our world," everyone would be happier for it, I think.

Thank you for a very uplifting read.

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