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 Ache  [E]
This is ache.
by Zazz L.
Review of Ache  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Indeed these breaks in the soul are becoming common to many countries. Harmony and happy co-existence seem things of a remote past, or was there harmony at all in the universe?
This free verse explains what symmetry of the soul consists of. Countries mentioned here have a common heritage and culture. Yet, even their worlds are torn apart by the erring leaders and kings of these regions. Nothing is real, nothing is constant.
Common culture and bonds find the comparison in the part of human body. The poet expresses pain and hurt when these parts fall apart and the body starts bleeding due to violence and war.
Thinking individuals could do nothing as the world around them rises in flames as gun fight rages.
A clear picture of a present chaos.

It flows well.

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