im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
The plot was a strange one to me. Someone hating their maraige? I know that happens lot but its the fact that why do people marry if they hate it?

Grammer)
Your grammer was nicely done and i saw no mistakes in your wording or your grammer. Good job.

Characters)
The only charcters were The mother the women and the man. Although since it is poetry Characters do not count most of the time.

Format)
Your format was very cool. The way you made all the paragraphs starting with the letter H lowercase. You were trying to point out something i just cant figure it out though.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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