im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
Great job on this. Your plot was about the ocean. The ocean is a great thing to write about on all levels. Alot of people write about the oceans. Mostly in poetry though. Thats what i find cool.

Grammer)
Again no grammer mistakes.

Characters)
The ocean glittering in the sun.

Format)
Your poetry format is very nicely done.

Good job and keep up the good work.

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