im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
What i found used most in this poem was the word another
another house
Or
ANOTER tree
You used it in a good way though. Good work

Grammer)
I dont know is rhymning is considered Grammer but you could have rhymned alot more then you did.

Characters)
No characters it poetry

Format)
Format was typical ofor poetry and i loved how you did so many Another's.

Good work and write on.

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