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| Hello, nmcd15. My name is Charlie and I'm happy to welcome you to WDC today with a quick review. Feel free to email me if you have any site questions or need a hand finding your way around.  General thoughts. Aw, no fun on vacations?  I for sure thought this was going to be about the sadness of vacation ending, not just the sadness of vacations in general.  Interesting perspective, indeed!That's cool. I liked the first two lines of the last stanza the best. It's fun to be home/in comfort and peace. I agree that sometimes vacations are best spent curled up at home with a good book instead of out of town with a million things to do. When I do leave town for vacation, I don't give myself a tight schedule. I like to just go with the flow. Consdier this. Maybe I'm missing something here, but I don't understand the last two lines at all. Please don't go/on vacation alone. I'm not actually sure what it is that makes vacations so sad to you, even after reading the poem. At one point it was talking about the kids not sleeping, which I thought might be due to staying in a hotel and the general excitement of the vacation, but then the last two lines talk about not going on vacation alone. Hmmm... The end. Overall, I thought this was an interesting and unique idea. Unfortunately, I think a few things need more clarity in the poem so that it will be less confusing. Thanks for sharing with us! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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