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 Welcome to WDC LJ! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! The theme of dreams is always fun as there are so many variations and experiences of them. I like this idea of precognition dreams was cool and imagine how it would be neat for a kid. Maybe you could even make it longer by adding how it might be an advantage. But then, when you ask the question at the end, I could also imagine the disadvantages--like seeing things you wouldn't want to know.Your description of the pattern of dreams and examples are interesting. I was a bit confused by the ages as you seem to start in the present time and then go back to age 9. Like did you have dreams you wouldn't remember before age 9? In the first line I think it would read better if you put the phrase,"like everyone else in the world" after my life,". I understand you want to show how yours may be different than other people. I think this is a good premise for a short story! I hope you will dream more and write on!  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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