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 Love in God's Being  [E]
A love poem for my beloved girlfriend, my angel - a prose poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by *Jenny*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tim!

What a very wonderful poem that tells exactly just how you feel about your girlfriend. The wording in this, actually almost made me feel the same way about your girlfriend. Really, I am kidding there but I definitely have felt exactly like that about a certain individual in my life.


My favorite part was the simile: Like a crystal blue, exotic day,
Forever unblemished and sparkling


Write on!

Jenny


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