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Review of Denial  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Delight*HI survivor48! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!

*Fire*The theme and title is an interesting concept for a wisdom piece, and such a common attitude these days where many want to avoid the truth in many experiences.

The couplets express the process of denial and its effects vividly. I like how you include that it does effect the inner life whether one will own it or not. The last lines sum up the consequence potently.

The two line verses are free in formation with no rhyme and remind me of wise sayings. They each are coherently connected to each other in a meaningful way.

The active image in verse one drew my attention and exuded a strong vibe. The vision of "punching" is a cool image. In verse 3, line 1 was a unique phrasing: "the inevitable rises" we could ask "inevitable what?" yet could ponder on our own perspective. I liked the "factuality" too. *Smile*

The use of metaphor of a fight makes so much sense. Well conceived expression.

Thanks for sharing your vision and wisdom which acts as a warning.*Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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