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Review of Back to School  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Father-daughter bond is beautifully brought to the fore. Parents are of tremendous value and sources of inspiration and love for their children. A major part of family harmony comes by taking these responsibilities such as supervising a daughter's or a son's progress in school, with pleasure.
"Lucille has always needed supervision during homework."
Each day spent with them counts for both parties. Golden memories are made of these sharing moments.
Trying to procrastinate with homework is a typical school-going child's psychology. It can be testing patience. This could be fun too.
Dialog is engaging. The girl is enjoying sharing fun with dad. Setting is visual.
language and style appeal.

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