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Times, They Are A-Changin'  [E]
Church goers ain't what they used to be, but all are welcome. [Rubaiyat]
by Winnie Kay
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

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Lol this is so true. So many "Young Christians" Are starting to look preatty nasty. Ear peircings and all sort of stuff. And yet the bible goes against scaring your body.

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Your grammer was done nicely although i think you spelled sandaled boy wrong.

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Your format was awesome. Good work.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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