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Christmas Magic  [E]
The magic of Christmas comes to a father and son. [Ballad]
by Winnie Kay
Review of Christmas Magic  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

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Awww what a cute poem. Very nice work. The whole thing about the father not having the money to get his boy a toy and then the next morning finding the exact toy the boy wanted under the tree.

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Impressive grammer.

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Your format was a typical poem format good job.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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