im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
Very nice plot the whole poem was about the season of spring. All poems are is like a book but turned into a short mix up of words. I love poetry and thats why i review alot.
Loved your plot though. Autumn is an awesome season.

Grammer)
Your grammer was great.

Format)
your format was a bit strange to me. I have seen it many of times i just havent used this type of format before.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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