im here to review your peice as a simply positive review and an anniversary review. Lol its a good way to double task. It keeps thing easier and cleaned up a bit.

Plot)
Butterflies are a great thing to write about. I love butterflies. They are so fun to watch from your porch or chase after when your a little kid.

Grammer)
Great grammer.

Format)
Your format was a weird one. Your first two paragraphs only had one word in it.

Keep up the good work and write on.

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