Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.
Your free verse poem is so full of emotion. Melancholy for one; in the case of the mom.
The form and structure are adequate for this piece.
The flow is quite smooth and easy on the eyes with it's symmetrical appearance.
You evoke such imagery that the reader is caught up in the tale and that's good writing to the Nth degree.
Pace is a steady march forward to the end.
Grammatically speaking, nary a jot nor tittle are found awry.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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