Fyn:
Poetry newsletter 8-26-15 is where your piece is featured.
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing material.

Sorry the occasion of this was the ride back from a funeral.
Your imagery is stunning. The reader sees the coffins upright.
The form is appropriate for this piece.
The flow is as smooth as silk. There are no grammatical bumps in the road, and the pace is a steady onward march.
Overall impression of this piece is simply "awe." You are a writer extraordinare and thank you for sharing in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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