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Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Hand1*I was looking for newly created poetry to read. I see, also, you are new to the site! I would like to wave a warm welcome to you!

Your poem is free verse and is very well written.

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about a loving relationship that has stood the test of time. You don't say how long, but you do say it is something that has lasted a good while. Bravo for that!

It is no wonder that is true when two people fit together so well.. and there is so much trust and caring.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I especially like this part:

"Like a jigsaw
But no puzzle
Our minds are as one
No pieces missing
Edges smooth
We share a soul
You still make me smile"

The concept of two beings with one soul is very romantic and inspiring. Shared happiness is bound to be the result.

Well done, indeed!
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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the writing at hand, based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it.

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