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 | Why I hate Fifty Shades of Grey !  [13+] An explanation of my stance and my when it comes to 50 Shites of Grey ! Very subjective.  |
| (3.0)| Hi RedEye   Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! It's been pleasure to review yours "Why I hate Fifty Shades of Grey !" on behalf of the Simply Positive Group. Please be reminded that I'm still newbie and that my review is based on one person's opinion and you have all rights to choose if you like it or not. So please feel free to use if you find something interesting or just ignore if you don't like something. Why I choose to review your story?As I searched the stories for reviews in 'Read a Newbie' forum, for the reason I want to welcome all of you to this great community of the writers, I have found yours. Even though I have heard and read tons of the opinions on famous Grey I wouldn't mind to check yours as well. I've read a book before they turned it into the movie. I wasn't impressed as well, not by the content of it but simply by the way it's written. To me it looked like it's all just rough draft and seemed like it needed a lot of editing before publishing. But there, E.L.James probably couldn't wait to get famous with it so she just forced the publishing. At least that's what I think. What I liked?I like the way you think of sex as an act. That's probably the most common opinion in the society, and mine as well. I have no idea to which age group you belong but you're totally right when you're saying that YA should have basic and normal education on that theme. 50.Shades of Grey is not one of them for sure. However, different people, different opinions, probably the writer was presented to BDSM in this way and she think that's the right one. She expressed herself in the only way she know about it even if it's wrong. What I didn't like?I mostly feel the reading of people in WdC, I like to have clear picture in my head of what's going on in the story and where it lead, the way it's written. The only thing I feel about your story is anger for something that you don't approve. As I said, different people, different opinions but it doesn't mean that we need to humiliate someone's existence in this world where we're all different. Words like f***ing s*** used in few places within this writing are not for 13+ rating that you set up here. As you're trying to bring up the point of the problem that world is facing doesn't it mean that you, as one aware person, should bring your opinion suitable for all group ages and speak about it in more nicely manners? Otherwise, this is just bunch of words that we can throw away together with the other opinions on 50 Shades of Grey, somewhere where no one will care about it anymore. Anyway, the writer got her popularity which was probably her target. She got money as well and we're all sitting in our rooms on the computer and trying to write something that will bring us to the stars as well. I think we should all dedicate ourselves more to something what will make this world better place instead of sharing opinions that are mostly based on the same thing, not approving differences between each other. Overall impression?I hope you didn't get me wrong on this, I don't hate 50. Shades of Grey, book and movie as well, I just think it's not presented in the right way to the world and I don't like it that way. It's the worse reading ever I admit, but just because of these reasons. However, we all respect each other in this world so I respect your way of seeing it and I found myself in small parts in it. Thank you for sharing your work with us and thank you for reminding us that the world is one mad place and we need to do something to not go further with madness. All smiles..   ~Minja~ "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP"  Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little ** Image ID #1418434 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/04/2015 @ 12:08pm EDT