A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port? You invited me to read in your folder - thank you very much for the invitation, Megan! What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? I knew when you said the wolf was with her that she would be alright. I was relieved to read that because it seemed like a dangerous thing for a young woman to be so alone and rejected by her tribe. What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item? I like the ending and that they make a home where people are kind and they are happy. Even though it isn't with their tribe, they have a new tribe of nice people to care about. Nice work, Megan! THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the writing at hand, based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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